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Title: Appal The Devil
Prompt: Macbeth (Banquo's Ghost)
Rating: R
Character: Merlin

Warnings: Major Character Death, Ghostly Gore

Avaunt! and quit my sight! let the earth hide thee!
Thy bones are marrowless, thy blood is cold;
Thou hast no speculation in those eyes
Which thou dost glare with!

Notes: For Merlin Horror fest!!! Title from Macbeth Act3 Sc4 in which Macbeth says he is "a bold [man], that dare look on that which might appal the devil". Thanks to my betas [ profile] altocello and [ profile] alby_mangroves!!

Date: 2013-11-04 12:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
asdfghjkl *shudder*

Omg. This ain't no pitiful, wailing, moaning spectre. This is an angry, vengeful accuser. He's here to take his due, and it won't be pretty.

The look in his eyes still sends shivers up my spine, and the moment's so clear in my mind - the man who murdered him walks up to his chair, unsuspsecting, and freezes as it swings around, this ghostly figure occupying it... I can imagine the shock of seeing it, the look of horror on his face.

Great job, Amph, so effective and intense. Wow.

Date: 2013-11-04 02:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you so much!! I love your comment!! **HUGS**

Date: 2013-11-04 01:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
That's one pissed ghost. Love it!

Date: 2013-11-04 02:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Yeah he is very "I Know What You Did Last Summer", LOL! Thanks Bun!!!

Date: 2013-11-04 02:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Very spooky. I loved how pissed off Merlin looks. Great job.

Date: 2013-11-04 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you!! I was going for a very I AM DISAPOINT! look, LOL! or, HDU?!?!!

Glad you like it!!!! ^_____^

Date: 2013-11-04 09:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Very creepy. That is one very mad ghost! Love the ectoplasm dripping off him.


Date: 2013-11-04 10:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you very much! (I was going for lake/bog water, but I like the ectoplasm interpretation too! ^__^ )

Date: 2013-11-08 06:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
:) Ah, lake water. That makes sense, too. :)


Date: 2013-11-05 08:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]

Oh man, when you originally sent this in, I had chills! Chills, I say! And that's before I noticed the neck wound! He looks so "JFC I SWEAR 2 GOD, I WILL HAUNT UR ASS 4EVER IF U DON'T GET UR SHIT TOGETHER."

Date: 2013-11-05 10:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
TEMPY!!!! I'm so happy you ran this great fest again!! I'm so glad you liked the piece! Merlin is indeed very "Listen here, you little shit..." LOL!


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